Broken, Broken, Shattered.

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Broken, Broken, Shattered.

Post by falling » Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:45 pm

i know what i feel, but i'm afraid to show it, inside, so real, no one else could know it, the whole truth and no lies, cutting deeper i can hear my soul cry, come on testify.

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Re: Broken, Broken, Shattered.

Post by CausticTears » Sun Jun 18, 2006 2:25 pm

I liked the flow on your poem... it has a distinct feeling of betrayel. Although it was a not so happy poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Broken, Broken, Shattered.

Post by falling » Sun Jun 18, 2006 3:36 pm

Yea it sorta does...betrayal may not be the right word though.
i know what i feel, but i'm afraid to show it, inside, so real, no one else could know it, the whole truth and no lies, cutting deeper i can hear my soul cry, come on testify.

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