My Friend No Longer

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MIRANDA09
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My Friend No Longer

Post by MIRANDA09 » Mon Jun 19, 2006 6:14 pm

My Friend No Longer



Why did you leave me

Here so alone and hurt?

You said you would always

Be there for me when I needed you,

But now you left me here.

You said you would never lie to me,

But you lied, behind my back.

You said you would pick me up when I was

Low and hurt, but you walked out of

My life causing me to fall and hurt even more.

I was there when you needed me, I held you

When you cried, I told you everything would be okay

When you felt hopeless, and you was my everything.

But now you walked out of my life forever,

And forever I will remain alone.





April 5, 2006
i like dead end signs.

at least they have the

decency to let you know

you're going nowhere.



[ n e v e r ] make someone your everything - because when they'ree gone ; you have nothing



A friend loves at all times.

-- Proverbs 17:17

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Re: My Friend No Longer

Post by SoccerGirl » Mon Jun 19, 2006 11:35 pm

I liked this one a lot 2.

Very deep and personal

I can realate

lol

good job

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Re: My Friend No Longer

Post by MIRANDA09 » Wed Jun 21, 2006 3:43 pm

Yay someone liked my poem...woot woot. That's when I just lost my best friend, but we're okay (she didn't die, but we gotten into a HUGE arguement so..yeah). Anyway, thanks for the reply. Take care, Miranda.
i like dead end signs.

at least they have the

decency to let you know

you're going nowhere.



[ n e v e r ] make someone your everything - because when they'ree gone ; you have nothing



A friend loves at all times.

-- Proverbs 17:17

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Re: My Friend No Longer

Post by Michie » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:23 pm

Nice poem.

It reminded me of my own past 'friend no longer' issues...

So incredibly relateable.



It was simple but strong.
My tears will be hidden behind this fake grin

You can see me through these metal bars-I won't let you in

It's my life and I screwed it-You're not to blame

And though I keep on trying, it's so hard to change.

-Steph



My email- [email=""]steph_w_3000@hotmail.com[/email]

Email me if you wanna talk!

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