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My Friend No Longer

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 6:14 pm
My Friend No Longer

Why did you leave me

Here so alone and hurt?

You said you would always

Be there for me when I needed you,

But now you left me here.

You said you would never lie to me,

But you lied, behind my back.

You said you would pick me up when I was

Low and hurt, but you walked out of

My life causing me to fall and hurt even more.

I was there when you needed me, I held you

When you cried, I told you everything would be okay

When you felt hopeless, and you was my everything.

But now you walked out of my life forever,

And forever I will remain alone.

April 5, 2006

Re: My Friend No Longer

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 11:35 pm
by SoccerGirl
I liked this one a lot 2.

Very deep and personal

I can realate


good job

Re: My Friend No Longer

Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 3:43 pm
Yay someone liked my poem...woot woot. That's when I just lost my best friend, but we're okay (she didn't die, but we gotten into a HUGE arguement so..yeah). Anyway, thanks for the reply. Take care, Miranda.

Re: My Friend No Longer

Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:23 pm
by Michie
Nice poem.

It reminded me of my own past 'friend no longer' issues...

So incredibly relateable.

It was simple but strong.