Hurt

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MIRANDA09
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Hurt

Post by MIRANDA09 » Mon Jun 19, 2006 6:15 pm

Hurt



Feeling so low and so alone

That you just want to

Break down and cry.



Tears flowing down my check

Like rain drops hitting on an umbrella.

Sadness and loneliness enters

My mind repeatedly.



Just to step forward through

The pain is all I want.

To stop the tears and

Forget the pain.



My escape I have yet to find.

Wanting to let go, but

Something holding me

Back from finding joy

In my lonely life.



Until then, I remain hurt.

There is hope, but I

Have yet to find the joy I am looking for.



March 30, 2006
i like dead end signs.

at least they have the

decency to let you know

you're going nowhere.



[ n e v e r ] make someone your everything - because when they'ree gone ; you have nothing



A friend loves at all times.

-- Proverbs 17:17

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Re: Hurt

Post by Michie » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:31 pm

I feel my own tears now.



So poignant, your writing is very 'stream-of-consciousness' and there is pattern or rhythm.


My escape I have yet to find.

Wanting to let go, but

Something holding me

Back from finding joy

In my lonely life.[/b]
This especially hit home to me. It's just so real...



I loved all three poems of yours I've seen so far. Off to see if you've done any others!
My tears will be hidden behind this fake grin

You can see me through these metal bars-I won't let you in

It's my life and I screwed it-You're not to blame

And though I keep on trying, it's so hard to change.

-Steph



My email- [email=""]steph_w_3000@hotmail.com[/email]

Email me if you wanna talk!

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