The Dying Rose

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MIRANDA09
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The Dying Rose

Post by MIRANDA09 » Mon Jun 19, 2006 6:16 pm

i like dead end signs.

at least they have the

decency to let you know

you're going nowhere.



[ n e v e r ] make someone your everything - because when they'ree gone ; you have nothing



A friend loves at all times.

-- Proverbs 17:17

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Re: The Dying Rose

Post by SoccerGirl » Mon Jun 19, 2006 9:47 pm

Are you kidding?

I loved this.

I write a lot of poerty myself , and i thought it ws aswome

keep it up!

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Re: The Dying Rose

Post by Lostinhersong » Sun Jun 25, 2006 6:58 pm

love it!
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Brittni: -rips pants off of me-

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Re: The Dying Rose

Post by Michie » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:20 pm

That was really beautiful.

I write a bit too.



I loved your metaphor.
My tears will be hidden behind this fake grin

You can see me through these metal bars-I won't let you in

It's my life and I screwed it-You're not to blame

And though I keep on trying, it's so hard to change.

-Steph



My email- [email=""]steph_w_3000@hotmail.com[/email]

Email me if you wanna talk!

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