Bleed

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Halo_n_Horns
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Bleed

Post by Halo_n_Horns » Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:37 am

Tormented soul

Travelling through hell

Tore my heart apart

I could never tell.

Shattered glass,

Debris and pain,

Battered flesh,

There is no gain.

Nothing left to

quench my thirst

Done is the deed,

I must be cursed.

A lightning seed, a pickled scream.

You leave me here to bleed.
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Re: Bleed

Post by CausticTears » Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:20 pm

I like the flow of that..the words, the flow.. I like it a lot.
Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around.

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