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okay i know it sucks but i needed to get this out....ive been holding it in for awhile now and i couldn't anymore...





i gave you everything

without any question

you were my first love

i was so happy

but you deceived me

you're a liar a cheater

and a back stabber

did you think of us

when you were with her?

while you were kissing her lips

could you feel me letting go?

did you hear my heart breaking

when you told her you loved her?

is it possible that you heard

our sons first laugh

over her emotions she screamed at you?

you had everything you needed

a loving woman and a gorgeous baby boy

how could you walk out on that?

my heart is overwhelmed by your lies

i thought you loved us?

how were we not good enough for you?

what did i do wrong?

was it the way i loved you

the way i said yes to marrying you

or could it be our angel i gave birth to?

how about the way i rubbed your back

after a long day at "work"

please tell me what i did

to deserve this

i just want to let it go

but it hurts too much.
<span style="font-family:Georgia"[I love my son!]



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I like the way you let everything out. It's very honest. Good Job.
Our attitude towards life determines lifes attitude towards us.

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I may have done some things that are wrong but hey who hasn't? I don't know anyone that is perfect. Do you?



People don't die from suicide they die from sadness.

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That which nourishes me also destroys me.

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thanks. i just kinda needed to let most of it out.
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