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anonymous08
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Post by anonymous08 » Fri Mar 23, 2007 1:35 pm

i'm about to fly



running, the tall grass brushes past my legs, the sun beats down and shines into my smile



sun beams captured, golden in my hair



hands out to catch the wind



fingers spark with the electricity of excitement



and i jump . . .
You couldn't be suicidal if your life depended on it.



there i go again, pretending that i'll fall

don't call the doctors!

they've seen it all before

they'll say just let her crash and burn

she'll learn

the attention just encourages her.

- Dresden Dolls "Girl Anachronism"


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Re: Bright

Post by CausticTears » Fri Mar 23, 2007 2:05 pm

Oo I like this. It's exciting

Good work
Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around.

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