Leaving Earth, I Promise

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Leaving Earth, I Promise

Post by anonymous08 » Wed May 30, 2007 11:30 pm

can you still see me?

i touch nothing, leave no trace

do you see through me?

or does something stop your gaze

does my breath hit you?

or have i stopped breathing yet

do my eyes scare you?

sometimes their power, i forget

am i a ghost now?

or do i still retain some life

will you keep me somehow?

or can i disappear tonite



you let go, and for a second i am real . . .

we have a moment just to feel.



then no life to keep me here

your small illusions disappear.
You couldn't be suicidal if your life depended on it.



there i go again, pretending that i'll fall

don't call the doctors!

they've seen it all before

they'll say just let her crash and burn

she'll learn

the attention just encourages her.

- Dresden Dolls "Girl Anachronism"


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Re: Leaving Earth, I Promise

Post by CausticTears » Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:03 am

oh i loved that

seriously, i loved it. i like the feel i get from it. keep it coming, i like reading your poems
Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around.

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Re: Leaving Earth, I Promise

Post by anonymous08 » Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:35 pm

thanks! not my best, but thanks for the encouragement!
You couldn't be suicidal if your life depended on it.



there i go again, pretending that i'll fall

don't call the doctors!

they've seen it all before

they'll say just let her crash and burn

she'll learn

the attention just encourages her.

- Dresden Dolls "Girl Anachronism"


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Re: Leaving Earth, I Promise

Post by Ana » Sun Jun 10, 2007 7:41 am

this is really good. i love your poems they describe how i feel at times.
Loves Chris with all my heart. without him i do not know where i would be. he is my savior and someday i hope to help him like he has helped me.



I love you chris.

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