letter to Vi

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anonymous08
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letter to Vi

Post by anonymous08 » Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:28 am

fragile creature

you are so much stronger than you know

but the higher up you climb

it will be further when you go

to step off of the ledge you're on

you need to grab a hold

of anything to keep you here

before your soul grows cold

don't let this be a start to just another

death of love

but try to keep your head up

to see help from above

you've reached out and i'm proud of you

for what you have achieved

i'm just sorry that the lies

were something you believed

but now you know that you can make it

so far down this road

so carry on and maybe hope

will lighten up your load
You couldn't be suicidal if your life depended on it.



there i go again, pretending that i'll fall

don't call the doctors!

they've seen it all before

they'll say just let her crash and burn

she'll learn

the attention just encourages her.

- Dresden Dolls "Girl Anachronism"


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Re: letter to Vi

Post by Lostinhersong » Tue Oct 09, 2007 1:33 pm

This was quite good. reminds me of Emily Dickinson.

Bravi.
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