Maybe You'll Be Fixed

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anonymous08
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Maybe You'll Be Fixed

Post by anonymous08 » Thu Mar 20, 2008 8:51 pm

something's not rite.

out of place.

so put all your crayons in color order,

clean up your room,

wash your hands,

count your steps,

careful! skip the cracks in the sidewalk! they're very very bad.

and maybe you'll be fixed.



maybe not.

maybe you'll have to resort to the darkness.

the walls you put up,

the cuts on your arm,

swallowing everything and keeping nothing down.



maybe then something will shift

and your world will be rite again.

maybe you'll be okay.



(maybe you'll never be fixed.)
You couldn't be suicidal if your life depended on it.



there i go again, pretending that i'll fall

don't call the doctors!

they've seen it all before

they'll say just let her crash and burn

she'll learn

the attention just encourages her.

- Dresden Dolls "Girl Anachronism"


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Re: Maybe You'll Be Fixed

Post by missy177 » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:07 pm

Its okay not as good as your other peom but I still liked it.

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