"Hurt"
The tears have dried
behind my swollen eyes
No one sees just how my heart bleeds
The love of my life is nowhere near
I'm falling apart
for this is much to hard
in my mind your picture hides
I see no more of what I need
my life is all blind to me
the memories the dreams
they are all haunting
you took my heart and broke it
like a fragil glass vase falling onto the floor
Is that what "SHE" taught you
after all I gave I come out the "LOSER"
they think I'm the "SLUT"
Yeah Right!
Maybe they should look at the one
who's made me out of sight
This world's full of love
and this world's full of hate
But I have done nothing wrong
so why am I in this FUCKING cage
you have the key let me out
don't you hear me dying now
you don't even look my way
is that because you're afraid of what "SHE" will say
I haven't changed I'm still the same
oh, wait I forgot that my heart is starting to rot
In your dreams I haunt your mind
but during the day you don't notice
because you're too preoccupied
to notice what you've done to me
they all know but you just ignore
the knocking in your brain coming from the back door
you say "It's just weird for us to be friends"
and you did it for "HER"
you just want the memories of me to end.
"Hurt" (May be triggering)
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"Hurt" (May be triggering)
Our attitude towards life determines lifes attitude towards us.
-Earl Nighingale
I may have done some things that are wrong but hey who hasn't? I don't know anyone that is perfect. Do you?
People don't die from suicide they die from sadness.
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That which nourishes me also destroys me.
ANGELINA JOLIE -So true for me. I believe it.
-Earl Nighingale
I may have done some things that are wrong but hey who hasn't? I don't know anyone that is perfect. Do you?
People don't die from suicide they die from sadness.
-ANONYMOUS
That which nourishes me also destroys me.
ANGELINA JOLIE -So true for me. I believe it.
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Re: "Hurt" (May be triggering)
I have noticed a lot of you have read this post. Yet no one replies. If at all possible could you please let me know what you think? I like other's inputs on what I write.
Our attitude towards life determines lifes attitude towards us.
-Earl Nighingale
I may have done some things that are wrong but hey who hasn't? I don't know anyone that is perfect. Do you?
People don't die from suicide they die from sadness.
-ANONYMOUS
That which nourishes me also destroys me.
ANGELINA JOLIE -So true for me. I believe it.
-Earl Nighingale
I may have done some things that are wrong but hey who hasn't? I don't know anyone that is perfect. Do you?
People don't die from suicide they die from sadness.
-ANONYMOUS
That which nourishes me also destroys me.
ANGELINA JOLIE -So true for me. I believe it.
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Re: "Hurt" (May be triggering)
welp, it seems personal to me, romance/broken hearts aren't really to my liking, but if they were I supose I'd like it a lot more. I like some of the more general lines, but once you start talking about "her" it seems like your speaking of a very specific person and a very specific incident, and it's not really a "her" that a reader can personnally imagine. sounds a bit resentful, more than a bit really. but personal poetry is usually more theraputic than it is anything else, so it doesn't matter if I don't know about "her" or understand exactly.
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