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Requiem
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Hallow

Post by Requiem » Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:38 pm

I can’t pacify this hunger

A fire that burns within me

Please don’t come around

I’m treading so softly

My will means nothing

What shall I become

I am

I will

When this self-destructive dance

Comes full circle

I rise

I fall

I won’t pacify this hunger

This madness that burns within me

Please come around

You’re treading so softly

Your good intentions mean nothing

What have I become

I lied

I died

When this self-destructive dance

Comes full circle

What guise shall I wear ‘till we meet again
A revolution without dancing is a revolution not worth having.

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Re: Hallow

Post by Cindy » Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:52 am

Very deep. That is one very good poem. Keep writing, you have talent.
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