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Emotionally Numb

Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:01 pm
by Pisces_Queen_225
Im emotionally numb

i no longer feel

my life is pointless

it isnt real



no matter how much i try

i never believed

that my emotionless heart

will ever be freed



my emotionless heart

has spun around

untill today

it knocked me down



it left me alone

with a thousand pieces

to put myself together

with no meaning no thesus

Re: Emotionally Numb

Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:21 am
by navynate
I liked the last line in the sense of the poetic feel. Its a touching piece, truly touching. Matters of the heart usually are, love to hear more especially those of other matters.

Re: Emotionally Numb

Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2012 6:21 pm
by invisibleartist
i can really feel the expression in this its good <img src='http://www.helpingteens.org/groups/publ ... >/punk.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Punk:' />