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Lost Inside Myself

Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 5:29 pm
by ~BrokenDown~
I’m lost, I’m dead, Its hard to breathe

is happiness there it’s not easy to believe

Confusion, hatred and guilt abound

behind this mask I wear around

I scream to the world but nobody hears

the screams are trapped inside my cage

along with my beaten soul and unleashed rage

here i am, crashing through a house of mirrors

filled with confliction and endless fears

Floods of tears still restrained

Burn behind my glass covered eyes

I look upon who i am “what is gained?”

my heart.. slowly bleeds and dies

every morning i awake

I in the mirror.. i am such a fake

I dare you, look in my eyes, look beyond.

you will see behind the mask..

but if you dare I will have to deny it..

too many times i have been hurt

adding more scars to my pile of dirt

I am locked up and lost forever

behind my eyes contained within myself

my heart locked up and put on the shelf

there are no chances of escape.. not ever

Here i am lost forever..

What do you think??

Re: Lost Inside Myself

Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 8:47 pm
by ~BrokenDown~
this is my first crack at rhyming <img src=' ... tongue.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':P' /> im not sure what too think about it lol <img src=' ... unsure.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':unsure:' />

Re: Lost Inside Myself

Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 1:02 pm
by ~BrokenDown~
So either nobody thinks or i just suck that bad at rhyming lol <img src=' ... tongue.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':P' />

Re: Lost Inside Myself

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 2:47 pm
by emilikee123
i think ur poem is realllyyy good. it explains things that happen a lot like when u said "behind this mask I wear around" i feel that way also because i try to hide my feelings in public and wear a fake smile (mask) but when i get home, i let it all out, but sometimes i hold my screams (in that cage) for days because i usually only let them out when i am the only one there. i think that you should be an author or something, good job!

Re: Lost Inside Myself

Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 7:51 am
by sabzy
Wow, I think it's really good, are you sure it's your first? <img src=' ... renske.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':renske:' />