Hurt
Feeling so low and so alone
That you just want to
Break down and cry.
Tears flowing down my check
Like rain drops hitting on an umbrella.
Sadness and loneliness enters
My mind repeatedly.
Just to step forward through
The pain is all I want.
To stop the tears and
Forget the pain.
My escape I have yet to find.
Wanting to let go, but
Something holding me
Back from finding joy
In my lonely life.
Until then, I remain hurt.
There is hope, but I
Have yet to find the joy I am looking for.
March 30, 2006
Hurt
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Michie
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Re: Hurt
I feel my own tears now.
So poignant, your writing is very 'stream-of-consciousness' and there is pattern or rhythm.
I loved all three poems of yours I've seen so far. Off to see if you've done any others!
So poignant, your writing is very 'stream-of-consciousness' and there is pattern or rhythm.
This especially hit home to me. It's just so real...My escape I have yet to find.
Wanting to let go, but
Something holding me
Back from finding joy
In my lonely life.[/b]
I loved all three poems of yours I've seen so far. Off to see if you've done any others!
My tears will be hidden behind this fake grin
You can see me through these metal bars-I won't let you in
It's my life and I screwed it-You're not to blame
And though I keep on trying, it's so hard to change.
-Steph
My email- [email=""]steph_w_3000@hotmail.com[/email]
Email me if you wanna talk!
You can see me through these metal bars-I won't let you in
It's my life and I screwed it-You're not to blame
And though I keep on trying, it's so hard to change.
-Steph
My email- [email=""]steph_w_3000@hotmail.com[/email]
Email me if you wanna talk!