*Should I put may be triggering in the subjects of any poem that isn't about being happy or something that's overwhelmingly positive, because I really don't know wear to draw the line between possibly triggering and not triggering.?*
Poem
Heart throbbing
But not with lust or shock
This immense fear of words
On and on you go
Apparently I'm not decent
Not fine unless I change
Analyzing my analysis
Throwing instinct out the door
Fighting natural thought
Is this you want from me?
Shall I use your concepts to judge myself?
Instead of simple action
I'll waste time
Internally discussing my own perception ever time I take a step
Lets pick apart all forms of thought
All ways of influence
Coining the broadest among them with words and phrases
Be yourself
But in the way I instruct
You can't know who you are
Or what do do
Not without my input
without my judgment of the way you judge your own judgment
You must find the answers that don't exist
Inventing theories
We cannot accept our limitation
Over intellectualizing
Shattered and picked at
killing the idea of life with broken words
Broken Words (may be triggering?)
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Wow! I thought that this was really deep it sounds like you are talking to someone who may be close to you or even just someone you may have just met. It can work both ways. I think you should keep writing. However the big words I though added a lot but can sometimes stree those out who read it with reading comprehension disabilities. Mine isn't that bad but sometimes there are things I can read and I'll have to read them over again and again before I can decipher what you are trying to say no offense. But it was very good. Keep writing.
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I may have done some things that are wrong but hey who hasn't? I don't know anyone that is perfect. Do you?
People don't die from suicide they die from sadness.
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That which nourishes me also destroys me.
ANGELINA JOLIE -So true for me. I believe it.
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Re: Broken Words (may be triggering?)
yup, I was talking to someone. I'm takeing a speach and communication class, and it's very frusterating to hear the teacher talk about how we should act, and think about how we are thinking, and spout out all these theories about human interaction and the way we think and react and telling us what is right and what is wrong. We should just leave things alone instead of trying so hard. Puting things into groups can help sometimes just so that we understand them better, but the things we're being told in this class, it's just over the edge. It's all a bunch of opinions. Everyone will interpret these things in different way, so why are you pretending like you know everything, and that your opinions are correct.
so yup
so yup
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