Im emotionally numb
i no longer feel
my life is pointless
it isnt real
no matter how much i try
i never believed
that my emotionless heart
will ever be freed
my emotionless heart
has spun around
untill today
it knocked me down
it left me alone
with a thousand pieces
to put myself together
with no meaning no thesus
Emotionally Numb
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navynate
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Re: Emotionally Numb
I liked the last line in the sense of the poetic feel. Its a touching piece, truly touching. Matters of the heart usually are, love to hear more especially those of other matters.
NavyNate [center]"The soft overcomes the hard,
The yielding overcomes the strong;
Every person knows this,
But no one can practice it." -Tao Te Ching[/center]
The yielding overcomes the strong;
Every person knows this,
But no one can practice it." -Tao Te Ching[/center]
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invisibleartist
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Re: Emotionally Numb
i can really feel the expression in this its good <img src='http://www.helpingteens.org/groups/publ ... >/punk.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Punk:' />
*Sometimes you need to run away just to see who will follow you*